Spahn and....
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Spahn and....
Sain and pray for rain.
Or.....
Sonny Gary and Liberatore and after them there's nothing more...
Or.....
Sonny Gary and Liberatore and after them there's nothing more...
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Re: Spahn and....
Mwlvilles's version has a much better poetic flow
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Re: Spahn and....
Darkness there, and nothing more
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Re: Spahn and....
After them, there’s nothing more. The cold north wind, blows through the door.
Re: Spahn and....
Correct.
The meter and the iamb are what make a rhyme work.
"Sonny Gray and Liberatore (7 syllables)
and
After them there's nothing more (7 syllable)"
Additionally, when pronouncing the syllables "tore" and "more", they are held in place a moment longer than the one which precedes each, which creates the emphasis.
Same is true of Spahn and Sain...and...pray for rain".
Same construction.
Re: Spahn and....
Not the same construction and also too wordy.
Gray and Matt and then fall flat.
This fits the original. More realistic too, although if Liberatore doesn't pick it up I'll have to offer another line. How about 'Gray and no way'?
Gray and Matt and then fall flat.
This fits the original. More realistic too, although if Liberatore doesn't pick it up I'll have to offer another line. How about 'Gray and no way'?
Re: Spahn and....
Actually, the original was:
"First we’ll use Spahn
then we’ll use Sain
Then an off day
followed by rain"
Broadcasters misquoted it so often over the decades that is it now better known in its truncated form.
My STL version is much truer to the actual original.
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Re: Spahn and....
The sun is bright
The team is floundering
They hurt my eyes
The team is floundering
They hurt my eyes
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